{"id":184,"date":"2012-03-22T16:33:19","date_gmt":"2012-03-22T16:33:19","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/grahamdinton.com\/wp\/?p=184"},"modified":"2012-03-23T07:17:52","modified_gmt":"2012-03-23T07:17:52","slug":"7-mechanics-of-interior-monologue","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/grahamdinton.com\/wp\/?p=184","title":{"rendered":"7 mechanics of Interior Monologue"},"content":{"rendered":"

Continuing with some techniques from a good book called: \u2018Self-Editing for Fiction Writers<\/a>\u2019 by Renni Browne and Dave King.<\/p>\n

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I always thought that internal thought was called interior dialogue, but that\u2019s probably because I like to have a conversation with myself! So, I guess it\u2019s more properly described as Interior Monologue.<\/p>\n

It\u2019s very important for my novel.<\/p>\n

In fact, I\u2019d say it is the most important element of any good novel. All novels have characters and, as readers, we want to know what they are thinking and we want to get inside their innermost thoughts and emotions. In that way, the story is brought alive. <\/p>\n

Interior monologue is something that good fiction can accomplish that movies cannot. No matter how good the actor is, he\/she can never fully show the innermost thoughts of the character in the way a good novel can.<\/p>\n

A good author needs to write in a way that moves from action to thought and back again without the reader seeing that as strange. In this way. the reader will begin to understand what the character is thinking and that is a powerful way to establish the character\u2019s personality.<\/p>\n

However, as it is so useful and powerful, it is sometimes too easy to over-use the technique. Like other aspects of writing fiction, the key is not to over-explain. <\/p>\n

It is beneficial to start with quite a bit of interior monologue in the early chapters, but as your novel develops the reader will get to know the main character very well and be able to predict how that character will think and behave in certain situations. So it is not necessary to spell out those thoughts later on.<\/p>\n

What\u2019s the right amount of interior monologue? Well, as always it\u2019s a balance, depending on scene, mood, feelings, emotions. Basically, it is impossible to say how much is right.<\/p>\n

Some mechanics:<\/p>\n

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  1. Don\u2019t use quotes, single or double. Be unobtrusive,<\/li>\n
  2. Assume that the reader gets it. There\u2019s no need to explain when it\u2019s interior monologue and when it isn\u2019t.<\/li>\n
  3. You don\u2019t need to have your character mutter or whisper to him\/herself. You\u2019re already in that character\u2019s viewpoint, so it isn\u2019t necessary (unless he is someone like me who tends to talk out loud to himself \u263a ).<\/li>\n
  4. Your character will think in his\/her own words, so it\u2019ll be in the same style as the dialogue. If the person has a word or phrase that he\/she uses frequently, then that will also appear in the interior monologue.<\/li>\n
  5. Occasionally you may need to use \u2018He thought\u2019 or \u2018She thought\u2019 to identify the passage of interior thought, but that should be very very rare.<\/li>\n
  6. Never have two characters with interior monologue in the same scene, it\u2019ll be too confusing. I keep it simple by sticking to one viewpoint per chapter but that is not essential.<\/li>\n
  7. If you\u2019re being successful at writing intimately from the character\u2019s point of view, then the distinction between interior thought and description will naturally blur. After all, description is coming from the point of view of your character, so it starts to become the same thing. All you are doing is drifting between the external senses and the mind of the character.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n

    What\u2019s your thoughts on this? Want to share them? Or keep them internal?<\/p>\n

    Thanks for listening today \u263a<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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